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Leaflet Review: Thief’s Covenant by Ari Marmell

February 21, 2012 by Kristy S. Gilbert 4 Comments

Thief's Covenant, Ari MarmellOnce she was Adrienne Satti, an orphan with a rags-to-riches story.

Now she is Widdershins, a thief with a sharp blade, a sharper wit, and help from a secret god living in her head.

But now something horrid, something dark, is reaching out for her, a past that refuses to let her go …

This is another book that was on my “books to look for in 2012” list. (It’s also on the list of books Lou Anders convinced me to buy with alarming ease. The guy’s a freaking hypnotist.) Before I start the review, I want to share a note about the cover. The image in this post and the cover on my book are different in one way that is significant to me: the apostrophe on my book is a curly quote, not a straight one. I can no longer tell if straight quotes bother me for true aesthetic reasons or because I’ve been trained to eradicate them, but they stab my soul one way or another. However, my scanner is rubbish, and all the online images I can find have the erroneous straight quote, so do me a favor and imagine the cover is typographically flawless, because the final product is.

Now I’ll review the actual text.

Renaissance Romp

This book has several things going for it. The plot races forward at a steady clip, seamlessly shifting from one plot arc to another. Although this is a YA book, Widdershins tackles adult issues—keeping food in her belly, balancing an investment portfolio, etc.—but she still keeps a youthful attitude and likeability. The book’s topics aren’t watered down for a younger audience either. For a novel labeled dark fantasy it’s on the light and friendly side of things, but it still fits comfortably in that sub-genre. The book also benefits from a fresher milieu than many secondary world fantasies: it is neither fully modern nor fully medieval, but takes root in a renaissance-style city called Davillon.

Although dark things happen in the book, it never stops being fun. Between Widdershins and Olgun, her personal god, nearly every page is filled with an element of sarcastic joy, despite the fact that at any given moment just about everything is going wrong. The characters make for good company, no matter the circumstances, which is not something I can say for every book I’ve read.

Some Quibbles

As with most books I review, I have a few quibbles. With Thief’s Covenant, most of them are on the prose level. Sometimes the humorous prose is overwrought, straining too hard for the laugh. Even so, there were plenty of times when it hit the sweet spot and I did laugh, and humor is more subjective than most things, so for some of you the jokes I find overwrought will hit you right on the funny bone.

There are also some more grammar- and usage-related issues: some rule-breaking that doesn’t seem to serve a purpose other than confusing me; some words (like miasma) that appear more frequently than they should (in my opinion); and some sentences I had to read multiple times to follow the action of a scene.

The good news: none of these issues stopped me from enjoying the story. It was fun, fast, and flavorful. I’ll be holding onto my copy, and the sequel, False Covenant, will most likely find its way onto my bookshelf. All minor quibbles aside, I can’t keep away from an upbeat character like Widdershins.

Cover illustration by Jason Chan.

Filed Under: Reviews Tagged With: Ari Marmell, fantasy, Lou Anders, Pyr, Thief's Covenant, typography, YA

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  1. Jordan says

    February 21, 2012 at 8:21 pm

    I’ve been excited about this one, too–thanks to Lou–but I’m finding that most of the books he sold me on have been only so-so. My wife loves YA, but not so much fantasy. Perhaps this is a good one to convert her?

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    • Kristy G. Stewart says

      February 22, 2012 at 8:07 am

      I loved Blackdog, which was one he sold me on (the climax took me by surprise, not in the best way, but I still loved the book), and this one was a ton of fun.

      This book is very much a secondary-world fantasy, so I’m not sure it would be the best conversion tool for a non-fantasy lover. However, the magic, such as it is, is very understated (Olgun can do things like muffle footsteps and pull off twists of fate, like rotted wood collapsing at just the right moment, but nothing crazy like raining fire from the heavens). Widdershins is a fun enough character that if your wife can get to liking her, it’ll get her through the book regardless. But since the book is so unlike your cookie-cutter YA–there aren’t many romantic elements, there’s no school/school equivalent the teen has to deal with, etc.–it might not have enough to link up with what she knows and loves. I’d have to know more about the types of YA books she frequently reads. It’s worth a try, though.

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      • Jordan says

        February 28, 2012 at 11:07 pm

        She really likes YA dystopian. Hunger Games, Uglies, Maze Runner, etc. (I’m excited to get Partials for her) Also (I’m ashamed to admit) vampire silliness. I try to point her to Mistborn, since it has a younger protagonist, but she really hates when I suggest things to her. She did, however, randomly pick up Elantris off my nightstand, and hasn’t put it down yet. Could be a good sign.

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        • Kristy G. Stewart says

          February 29, 2012 at 7:55 am

          If she’s into the dystopian, I can see her liking Thief’s Covenant. It’s YA dark fantasy, so it shares some elements with dystopian thematically. You could casually place it on an end table or the kitchen counter.

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